i like that this poem is repetitive in the sense it starts with the same thing like an "I am" poem. This poem is simple but sweet, easy to understand and still deep hearted.
My heart used to be black This day is back It's color is red I turned ahead I have someone for this day He kisses me as we lay Those chocolates a filled in boxes The roses smell wonderful I will never feel dreadful
Love is something that should be cherished not bent and broken.
ReplyDeleteLove is the music of the heart, every note has feel.
Feeling*
ReplyDeletekool it reminds me of old times and my naivenes
ReplyDeletei like that this poem is repetitive in the sense it starts with the same thing like an "I am" poem. This poem is simple but sweet, easy to understand and still deep hearted.
ReplyDeletesigh old times new endings
ReplyDeletethe poem is good, but i really just don't cair for how sappy it is
ReplyDeletehere miss hatfield are my poems about 4 of the 7 deadly sins greed, wrath, gluttony, envy ,
ReplyDeletei want more green
i want more gold
i cant be Sean
i will be bold
i hate her so much
words that sting like killer bees
she has a deadly touch
god save me please
hunger in the air
for power that eats at your core
i cant stop feeling it i swear
i cant wait for what the world has in store
why everywhere around me
i hungerly see thy all have more than me
i stop and look to see
i cant help but feel super jealousy
easy as cake except the last one
ReplyDeleteMy heart used to be black
ReplyDeleteThis day is back
It's color is red
I turned ahead
I have someone for this day
He kisses me as we lay
Those chocolates a filled in boxes
The roses smell wonderful
I will never feel dreadful